Jun
Dear sir or madem
i am intrested in a full time permenent posistion within your organisation, i am fully flexiable and can work anytime througout the week, and consider myself to be hard working and relible.
i would welcome the oppertunity to meet yourself and discuss any potential roles you might have avalible.
please accept my CV attached as an application of employment
I would be grateful if you could keep my details on file for any futhur roles avalible
yours sincerley
Is that a good letter to send to companys to see if they have any jobs? please dont worry about the punctuation or spellings…just the content.
Answer:
Don't state you're “fully flexible” as it makes you sound like a gymnast!! Also, try and tailor it a bit to each company you send it to. Try and find the name of a relevant person to send it to at the organisation, that way it shows a bit of initiative. Don't say “meet yourself” say “meet you”
Don't say the last line as that’s saying you accept that they won't be interested. Change it to:
I very much look forward to hearing from you furher to my application. If you would like to discuss any of the elements within my CV, please feel free to call me on ….mob number.
Good luck.
Answer:
Sometimes they like something more personal. Like implicate something that you've done in the past. For example : “When I was working with Xcor, I led a team of over 10 people to meet a deadline that didn't seem possible. Ever since then, I knew what I wanted to do in life… blah blah blah”
Answer:
Sounds good to me short and to the point. But I'd take out fully flexible and make it just flexible. The first sounds abit odd to me.
Please do make sure you spell check though